I fully agree with Redtowrite's views expressed in his poem 'Where words come to life'. The abilty of writing is really a gift given to us by God. Writing comes from a secret world. When we close our eyes, the paper in front of us is filled with words, images, ideas and imaginations. What a surprise!
And thus flows out yet another super play with words from Lucifer through his poem.'devil is devilishly a demon'The dexterity of Lucfer to play with words is super, superb. But it is not mere playing with words. His lines carry very very deep meanings which we cannot disagree. Best wishes.
'Email song' by fyn is a very striking poem.I think nobody has ever thought of writing such a poem. On earth now each and everyone has got net connections, mobile phones and their own emails. But it is a pity that in heaven angels do not have such facilities. How better it would have been if they too have these facilities. If so the poet could contact the father in heaven and inform him the details. A good poem.
'A truth'by Paradoxical is a short poem of six lines.Through these six lines, the poet has successfully presented a truth of the world going on.He points out that many truths are there in making the world so bright. But many truths were lost throughout the long infernal fight!Really a good poem to read.
A very good poem about heart. What a wonderful organ is our heart!It is the be all and end all of our existance. It never stops till our death. It is the seat god in us. It can understand other hearts for which language is not a barrier. How fortunate we are to embody such a wonderful organ. Good poem.
In the poem 'conquering the mind, body and soul' Lucifer, the poet makes a philosophical journey in to the problem of conquering the mind, body and soul.This conquering problem has been a live issue of humanity from time immemmorial. Though simple in style it is not simple idea wise. We have think in depth. Good poem.
In his poem 'make or break' the poet Lucifer surprises us with his dexterity of using words with his philosophical ideas.He says mathematic is to make or break. Following it he says that a solution to make or break. So mathematic is the solution. Thus flows his thought to our minds. Really a good poem.
The poem'Beyond Reflection'by the poet Kathie Stehr is really a noteworthy one. We cannot disagree when the poet asks:How much of what we see is not reality. Yes dear poet,none of us always reflect on inner truth. We silly minded human beings lack that inner vision to see things in the true perspective. I like the poem. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
The poem'A new opportunity:A behive of activity' by the poet Tim Chiu is a good poem to read and enjoy. The style and language applied it are simple, but keeping the dignity of the poet's thought wave.I really appreciate the poet's mind which really is a treasure house very many ideas🌹🌹🌹
Racial discremination is a horrifying mania which has affected the humanity from time immemorial. The whites claim that they are superior to the blacks. What scientific logic is there in it! Colour is the contribution of the climate in which we live. A good poem.
With his poem'Just Delve In', the poet Tim Chiu spreads before the readers a handfull of examples in support of the subsequent lines in the poem.L
He says that a medium sized spill can be wiped off, broken glass pieces canbe collected and disposed safely.Like these silly acts, man if powerful enough to do greater actions for the goodness of humanity.
A good poem.
Really a comforting image. We feel that the comforting hands of Jesus are embracing us and our sorrows are fully wiped off.Thanks a lot to Jaiam for posting such an inspiring image.In this present world of turmoil,calamity,sorrow and unrest,how fortunate we are to seek solace in the hands of Lord Jesus.
A very good and well deserving tribute which can be given to a father. It is a trend world wide to praise high of the importance of mothers. I am not finding fault with the common trend. But my complaint is that the fathers are treated with lesser importance in poetry. S good porm. l like it. Best wishes 🌹👍🏻👍🏻
The three lined poem 'Cockroach'by the poet Kalixta is short only in size. But it takes our attention to the ceiling above where the cockroach is watching below.The poet must have been frightened by the watching of the cockroach. That may be why the poet and others beat on. Good.
The poem 'A True Jedi Knight'as the poet Kathie Stehr
stated is dedicated to Courtney, the poet's son's good friend that had Cystic Fibrosis.The style and vocabulary used are simple, but quite efgective in expressing what the poet has in mind. A good poem. I like it. Best wishes. 🌹
The poet Joey' sweet wishes for his love in his poem'On the otherside'is really interesting to read. Though she is under the same mooon's gaze,she is across the vast Atlantic. Though they are miles apart, they are united in dream and thought. Such is the power of love. A good poem.
The poem 'body, mercy, soul' by lucifer is interesting to read. Though at first sight it appear as a playing with words, on subsequent readings its deep meanings folds before us one by one. The philosopical mind is well revealed through the lines. I like poem. Good luck.
'The Battle of the Galaxy'the poem by Lizze is an interesting one to read. A little boy saving the human race from the attack of the aliens is the subject matter of the poem. The style is simple and and the language used is also simple, yet it is a good poem.
'Sad', a poem by Bear is so short, but it deals with a problem which people face wide over everywhere. Nobody listen to our words and nobody cares our actions.But the poem lacks some clarity. It would have been if the poem had a few more
lines. A good poemj.
'To A Fallen leaf in Autumn' by rl is a philosophical poem. The leaf is only a symbol. The fallen leaf is to show how short is the span of existance
The leaf falls and an other leaf takes its place. Nothing is unavoidable.The poet prays that may god hold a place for it. A good poem.
'In mangolia'by Kare enga in montan is a typical poem. The words in it are strewn far apart.They are to be picked up to get the meaning. The subject as the picture shows is a laughing competition by the child and the camel in the desert. The innocent child
laughs as it is unaware of the hurdles in passing away from the deset, but the camel laughs because as it thinks it is all an easy thing for it to pass through the desert. A good poem.
Though very short in size, the poem'Senryu' by Jamisonbrown occupies a large area in our mind with the thoughts and feelings it generates. While driving, the driving husband closed his eyes to save the memories of 'you'. The ambiguous 'you' can be his wife. The wife realises the danger of closing the eyes and shouts to stop the car, to avoid the danger of both of them becoming memories. A good poem.
The poem 'The Secret' by the poetess Vaiyshnavi is a sweet love poem. It is a secret love, but it is genuine love. The love is meant for keeping inside the soul till the last breath. The poem flows into our mind like a serene stream inundating is banks with a sweet pleasure of having read it.I like the poem very much.
The image of the lady in the poem 'In Prayer' is a suitable one. The woman it seems is radiating a pious air around her. The halo around jer head is another addition to depict her deep prayer. The painter has successfully depicted her with all the attributions of her prayer.
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