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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I loved it! Really cute and funny. I would suggest changing the period to a question mark on "Well, you know what little blinking, soulless, heartless cursor?" I would also maybe take one of the two "little" words out. And maybe change the "name you" to "dub you". But I loved it truly! Well done!
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