Karma's (rainbowunicorn) Reviews

Karma

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20 Public Reviews Given

20 Total Reviews Given

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#3520449

Review of The Musician

Review by Karma

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

I find myself confused on the setting, is it the end of the world? Where is everyone? Why radiation, what happened before hand?
There is a good line here, and I love you word choice for the piece.

-Karma.

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#3520430

Review of Deadly love

Review by Karma

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Oooooohhhhh. Very good. I could feel this poem.

I love the last stanza
"Like a reapers kiss
You set my soul on fire
Your my darkest wish
My forbidden desire."

Very well written and very well worded. Lines flow together which is great.

Keep writing.

-Karma

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#3517058

Review of White Water Life

Review by Karma

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Very nice, your lines flow smoothly and the line: The challenges; aren’t black or white but shades of gray, really speaks to me. Very well done. Keep up the good work.

-Karma.

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#3517051

Review of Dancing With A Heartache

Review by Karma

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Really nice, I didn't feel like the lines were forced and they flowed very well. My favorite line is: We softly swayed, a last embrace; a gentle touch upon the face. Keep up the good work. :)

-Karma.

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#3500658

Review of Artists

Review by Karma

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I really really enjoyed this. I could actually picture a female screamo singer singing this for a good. Really good I love how you compare the person to an artist. I have a lot of respect for this poem. Keep up the good work. :)

-Karma.

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#3500653

Review of A Real Naruto Quiz

Review by Karma

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Fail on my behalf.. I thought I could remember more. Lol but it was fun.

-Karma.

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#3500636

Review of Nightlight

Review by Karma

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I really really like this poem. It sort of caught me by the title. I also love how you use to words. I can also feel so sad :( I love it.

-Karma.

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#3496719

Review of The Box in the Corner

Review by Karma

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

Very good however I found it slightly confusing... It states that Patty was dead at the end; however, at the beginning it was all about Patty and her children... Was her diary a lie? Or maybe it was just a little confusing on the whole thing. I liked it however. Very nice.

-Karma.

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#3496692

Review of You're not there

Review by Karma

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Sounds like to me that this could be written as a song. Very good, you leave the reader curious about why she wants him not to be there or the other way around. I really like this. Keep up the good work. :)

-Karma.

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#3496665

Review of The Voice Inside My Head

Review by Karma

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I really like this poem. I think it is a good comprehension of how people feel when they feel as others are "out of their league." Very nice, I would love to see more. :)