such a small poem with as much feeling as an epic poem thats awesome to see. the flow is great and has a feeling many can relate to. i like the style as well. i like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you for posting such a nice piece of art. keep it up.
i love it!!!!!!!!!! its perfect and sounds great in my head and out loud. congrats, those things are the most important to have. well writen and the flow is great. the feelings and depth are something i always look for. all i can say now is ''i love it!!!!!!!!!!''
this one got me questioning my own thought. and i like the flow and it all fits together. I've never gone bowling but i may have to know to better understand your work but i like that. its a great masterpiece. thank you for posting it on hear
i realy liked the intense and depth this poem had. the flow was just as good. the style was easy to read and you have one heck of a talent.
inspireing,sorry for my spelling. and sad i dont see that often; thank you for posting this masterpiece
i love poems that tells a story that is personal and something people can relate to. when theres good there is bad and its good you have both storys in one that will get many to think and make a change or see more when something changes in front of them.thank you
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