Katwoman45,
I really like your poem, there was only one phrase I did not understand, what does it mean to have, July-stained feet? Did you leave it to be open for interpretation, or is there a specific picture you were looking to give? I'm very interested in knowing.=). Thank you for sharing.
Prosperous Snow,
I like your poem, though I've never had a banana split with pineapple, I'm very curious, lol. Also, you've got me wanting a banana split, even though it's freezing cold outside, I still want one. Your poem is awesome, nice job. =).
Lostghost,
I like your poem. I understand the emotion. Maybe, you can select different words for certain lines, I mean that's what I see. If there was a certain intention with some words you decided to chose, then I am interested in hearing them, so I can understand the words that I did not seem to fully grasp. Though, I like it, and it's quite nice.
alisonc,
I like the story you are trying to put together, but it seems to be getting weird. It feels a bit outrageous, and quite like a porn, with little taste and no good actors. It would be better with detail and more explanation. Happy new year.
W.D.Wilcox,
I like your short story, but you left me hanging really bad, lol. Is there a continuance of the story? I am very interested, please let me know. I did truly enjoy it. Well, happy new year.
Dear jpmurphy,
Your poem is beautiful, it is now a favorite of mine. I like your style o rhyming, and how you present it so well. This is my favorite verse;
"Each time we talk
More of you I see
Hands on the clock
My one enemy
God please, stay right here, do not disappear."
What a powerful verse, and the ending line sums everything. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry.
Dear Soulquest,
I really like your poem, it is interesting. I like,
"There are no shadows to fear,
for where there is no light shadows do not exist"
It is a really cool line, and pleasing. I am going to read the rest of your poetry, I like it.
Sincerely,
Raul
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