I just wanted to say that this is a very well done interactive story you have here. what really got me is how well some of the chapter fit into the overall star wars theme. so not only is it good weight gain story but a really good fan fiction as well. funny thing is that there was nothing in star wars to me that I wanted to see or read about weight gain. however after reading a few chapters here, I was impressive by them.
so I hope you continue to produce more awesome chapters as stories here. have a nice day.
Well I just came across a really good interactive story. There are a lot of good stories and chapters here and for the most part, I really enjoy them!
One thing I will say I wish that more of the stories and chapter fit the mood of the story. As well as how the characters act like in the story, but that is okay.
So thanks for your time and I hope you have a nice day.
just like the other one that you have but this has much more things going on with. this I might one day add my own stuff as well. however until then keep up the great work and keep it classy!
so far this is a nice little weight gain story for sonic characters. I would love to add my own chapters once I am done with my own stories at my account. I wish best of luck in what you do and I will see you around.
I love to see these Disney weight gain interactive stories every time they come up on writing.com. so for that reason, I gave this interactive story two stars.
know the reason why I did not give this more stars is because there is not much here. I think in time more chapters will be added and I might change this review. I would love to add some chapters of my own as well.
so, thanks for your time and I hope you have a great day.
this by far one of the best interactive weight gain stories I have seen on writing.com. not only that, but one of the most added to that I have seen in a while. I would love to add my own chapters into this interactive story. I am quite busy with other thing at the moment.
this interactive story has a lot of success going for it and I hope it get even more.
thank you for your time and I hope you have a great day.
I just want to say that this is starting out nicely. Even if there is not much here, I could see it expanding in the future. I'd be more than happy to add chapters as well. however, I am busy with other stuff at the moment.
it is always nice to see a these kind of interactive stories. I hope you have a nice day and thank you for your time.
there is not much here at the moment but I can see this story grow in time. I am more than happy to add my own chapters to the story. it is just that I am busy with other stories at the moment.
I am happy to see that someone enjoy The ladies from The Incredibles. so thank you for your time and have a nice day.
I have not seen any interactive venture bro female weight gain stories here on writing.com. For that reason, I do enjoyed the fact that there is one out there. good to know that there is someone who has the eye's open in these kind of things.
as of now, there is not much here but given time, there will be. I hope more people uncover this interactive story and find it in themselves to add a chapter.
I am a big fan of any Gwen from Ben 10 weight gain stories! what you have here is not much, but in time it will grow. I would love to add my own stories to this, once I finish my own stories.
I love to give feedback to others, it is just how I am. maybe you are the same way.
I know there is not much here, but I see that it can grow( not a pun). if I find it interesting enough, I can even add my own chapters to this. Even if I do not know the characters of Nancy Drew.
so keep up with the good work and this will expand nicely. ( yes that is a pun)
very well done interactive story. it has something for everyone and love to see the creator putting their own additions. I would to add some of my own as well. hope you found the review insightful.
very well done and would love to add my own stories in her as well. not only that but your stories are very well put together! how to see more of this!
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