this is so real and devastating - all over the world where poverty is rife, crime against children is worse. I can feel the cruelty and hopelessness grind into your soul. Haunting and beautiful... well done
I sense a great struggle, a determination, a clarity of purpose ... good, clean and concise . I like the staccato rhythm, the beat in the background .. it is a good song
Well Gale, being a South African I understand how the most incredible stories are twisted out of the truth - this is going to be a ripping good tell when its done. Keep writing....
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