Wow! Great story. From the very beginning I knew this was going to be one of those special writes. This actually should be published somewhere. The way you begun the story was great and I love the way you swich the flow of the story . Everything was unexpected and it really left me wanting to read more and know more about the characters. Great write, you are an inspiration.
Some times the simple things are best. Writers often try to go to far in their explanations of the things that are right in front of them and as we can see you have said it so well with the simplest of word.
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