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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
Real nice. I love the word choice and your talent definately shines here. I think searching is a fitting title but you could leave it untitled. The way you finish the firt stanza is well done. AT times it seems a little obscure as to what your saying but usually after I read the following line it all makes sense and creates a very nice flow. Your word choice and excellent lines in some way might take away from what your trying to say as well. I love it though.
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