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Review by rox Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is quiet a good Crossword Puzzle. I like the questions. However I would like it if in the response you tell me the answers as I am greatly stumped. Me and my friends really enjoyed trying to crack this code. However I would like it if you increase the number of questions. Thanks a lot. I would appreciate it if you give me some GPS. Thanks.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice Crossword. I like how some seem like child's play while others are extremely hard. I have to confess I was stumped and only got one correct. I have an issue on the fact that some of the questions weren't clear enough. I mean I didn't understand what you were asking in some of them. Keep working on these.
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Review of The Journey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I really like this story. However the stranded part. It doesn't make the reader feel sad. Use this tip in your write ups. Your story must make a reader, smile, think or feel sad. Other than that I like the main thing. I also like how the character Samantha likes to argue so much. All stories need a stubborn character. Also the ending. Do you mean to say that the character died and the new island was heaven? Or did they just stumble upon it.? All in all good story but you could improve. Write On...


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Review of The Ice Lake  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Why this story is fantastic. I really like how you have made the emotions so visible, i'ts almost like you can feel the story tellers despair and sadness. I also like how you have shown the rather selfish and arrogant woman's character traits. I would love to see a sequel for this story. However the casual reader might have a bit difficulty understanding the story so try to make it a bit clearer. Well done and write on.


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