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Review of Instructions  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is an original and well-written love poem -- not easy to achieve. I really like the first and last two lines. Also, "physical itinerary" is a wonderful phrase. I am not so sure about "my brain becoming decomposed like benedicta" or "I love you without a
bluff" but don't know what to suggest as replacements. Anyway, I think the poem show a great deal of talent and promise. Keep writing!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A delightful poem and a lovely picture.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A lovely poem in all senses of the word.
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