This is a very nice poem and I really like the name as well. It flows well and the grammer and spelling look good as well.
I try to write poems as well however mine never seem come out the way I hoped.
Hi there!! I just read your writting!! It was very good. The only thing I found was one little spellibg error. Otherwise it's perfect!!! I really like your view of Love.
plain and simple it is the greatest joy and sorrow in life
seeked by all who just want a (glipse) at its glory
This is a very well wriiten article. There are a few things though.
Many scholars believe that the Hippocratic (oath) was written by the (Pythaoreans) as proposed by Ludwig Edelstein,
Many scholars believe that the Hippocratic (Oath) was written by the (Pythagoreans) as proposed by Ludwig Edelstein, or maybe just a rite of passage for all physicians.
An oath (that) they (foloow) like a code of honor, at least for some. I don't really care about the history of the oath itself granted that it is very interesting.
An oath they follow
unless your a (childs) mind and find a nice looking pair of shoes that are one size to small but you have to have
a child's mind
if a doctor is needed off duty for an emergency it would be wise to offer his (assistence) but otherwise when he is in his throne office,
if a doctor is needed off duty for an emergency it would be wise to offer his (assistance) but otherwise when he is in his throne office
I'm sure you have quite a bit of feed back about this poem. Although it is quite perfect there is one area that I had to read twice. You seem like a very good writer and I'm sure your poem is a little over my head.
"I saw his soul a-winging
And I felt the angels cry."
I am not sure what a-winging is but if angels cry then it must be sad :)
I Have just finished reading in your blog, current entries and some back entries. Well written and very honest in your subject matter. Very personal entries are always the hardest to write. Also maybe add more of what is going on in your life, so people can get to know you better.
I look forward to reading more of your entries in the future.
I really like your poem. I think the first verse was the best. It was really strong and got my attention quickly. The second on ewas good s well although it was just a little long. Overall I really liked it.
I will pray with you. I am so sorry to hear this. I couldn't imagine this happening to someone I love. I will put you and your husband on my prayer list. Remember God never gives you more than you can handle.
This is very nice and well written. I didn't see anything wrong with it. It made me happy when I read it. Overall I really liked it. It seems to flow well and is easy to understand and read. Good Job!!!!
This is very well written however very sad. You did a great job converting your feelings to word. The poem flows well and is easy to read/ understand. I really liked it. I didn't see anything wrong with it. Good Job!!!!
This is so cute. I really like it. It seems to flow very well and is easy to understand. I think the reader will be able to relate with it. I didn't see anything wrong with it. This is very well written. Good Job!!! You should be proud of yourself.
This is so sweet. I was able to relate with you. I had my husband read this and he liked it too. It flows well and was easy to understand. This is a great poem for Valentine's Day. Good job!!! You should be proud of yourself.
This is a really nice love poem. This flows well and was really easy to understand. Overall I really liked it. I didn't see anything wrong with it. You should be very proud of this poem. I really like this love poem it kind of reminds me of my relationship.
WOW this was really a great poem. I love this poem. I like to try to write love poems too. This made me feel warm and happy. What a sweet poem. It was very well written and easy to read. It flows well. You should be very pleased with this poem. Good job
Good job with this poem. I like the way it flows. You did a good job expressing your feelings through this poem. I really liked it. I look forward to reading more of your work. Overall this is a good poem.
This was GREAT!!! It kinda made me sad but I also felt anger. It was very well written. This flows well and was easy to read. I really liked it. This is one of the best poems I have read in a long time. I didn't see anything wrong with it. Good job!!!
This was very good. I began to feel sad as I was reading it. I began to feel your pain. So, you did a good job converting feelings to words. I didn't see anything wrong with it. I really liked it but I feel a little sad now. Good job!!! I really like it.
WOW!!!! This is perfect. This is well written and easy to read. I have found the person you write about.
This made me feel happy when I read it. I am going to have my husband read it too.
I didn't find anything wrong with it. Good job. You really have a gift.
Okay Okay I rated you with a FIVE. I know they say not uses those often but I LOVED your poem. I can't wait to read your others. I think it was perfect. It even made my eyes water. I have a German Shep too. You were able to capture your feelings and display them with words.
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