This is a review of the poem entitled "Mr. Right" written by Tammy.
This is a well-written poem about a woman's lost love. The stanzas contain rhymes that display feelings of emotion and despair.
Personal Experience: I had a similar, but different situation. I remember how I had to give up on a lost love several years ago. The person was not willing to stop playing the field. I'm thankful that I made the right decision.
Feelings/Like: I like the way the stanzas display the emotions of a woman who realizes that her love for another is lost. Sometimes, a woman refuses to see the light.
Impression: I was impressed with the way the author weaved rhyming words into her feelings. The author's ability to put her feeling into writing can be therapeutic. Also, the ability to let go is impressive.
Suggestions: I suggest that you continue to write with emotion and clarity in your poetry.
This is a review of the poem "Family" written by Fhionnuisce.
Thoughts: My thoughts lead me to sense that the author could use a boost in
self-esteem. While family is great for having inner confidence, we as humans
need our own inner feelings of worth. All of us have self-worth. However, if you are the leader of your
family, it is good that you are on the right path for loving and nurturing family.
Like/Feelings: I like how the author is drawn to family. It is important to
value family and cherish the connection with those involved. Family can be a great anchor for love,
tradition, and heritage. I like that the author shared his/her feelings in a poem so openly.
Impression: I am impressed that you see yourself as being a better person because of family. It is great that you
have improved yourself for the sake of family. It is great to find solace in the strength of others, especially your loved ones.
Suggestions: Do continue to write good heartfelt poetry. Be encouraged to dig deep inside to bring forth your own
self-worth. It is good to value family, but you must not put too much confidence in other humans. Be sure to cherish family
and know yourself as a great human being.
This is a review of the poem "Perspective" written by EllisRosser.
Personal Experience: Yes, many things are so expensive this year. I left my wants in the stores and focused on the important things that needed to be done.
Feelings/Like: I feel the pull on your emotions as you realize how hard it is on your parents to give what they really do not have to provide. I like how you show compassion for them.
Impression: I am impressed with how you are willing to put your feelings aside and consider your family's situation.
Suggestions:. I am understanding that you regret receiving your first present ever, since you know that your family may suffer for it. Is this true? I suggest that you make your last stanza a little clearer. As a whole, the poem is a very good. Please continue to write with feeling and inspiration.
I will present a review of One With the Dance by Cheri Annemos.
Interesting Fact: I found it interesting that Arielle decided to join Cal in his Matador impromptu that moved her away from her kitchen chores. Previously, she had started to move and sway with the music. This was a moment that they needed to relax and have some fun.
What I like: I like how Arielle remembered her kitchen duties from her childhood and chose to take responsibility by cleaning the kitchen. Her positive attitude made the job easier to complete.
Impression: I was impressed with how Arielle and Cal allowed the music to become an energetic distraction for them. They chose to divert from what nearly became a big disagreement about a friend who hit people with the dish towel.
Suggestions: I suggest that you continue to write more light-hearted stories that lift the spirit.
I would like to offer my review of "Ella and the Moon" by Unapologetic Poetess.
Personal Experience:{/b} I am reminded of the family gatherings that happened during the time when I was younger. I am not sure what age I was ~ perhaps I was preschool age. I remember how family members visited for a few days and we had meals together along with great fellowship.
Feelings/Like:{/b} I get a good feeling as I read of how you are careful to preserve the memory of special times with your family.
Impression{/b} I was impressed by the wisdom that you used in seeing the importance of your little one and how her future can be molded by the stories and actions of family.
Suggestions{/b} I suggest that you continue to nurture the young people in your life. It is good that you are using your life as a teacher and a guide who is very much needed during these times.
I reviewed the story entitled "Edward" by kbritton97. It is a touching story written in memory of the author's nephew, Edward, Jr.
Personal Experience:I agree with you that people come into our lives for a special reason. As a young girl, I was blessed to spend a short period of time with my grandfather. He made a great impression upon my life. I will always remember him.
Feelings/Like:I like that you allowed your experience to affect you in a positive way.
Impression:I am impressed by the sharing of your nephew's memory. I hope this has provided help for any need of healing for you.
Recommendations/Comments:I recommend that you continue to produce great writing. Be careful to watch your grammar.
This story entitled "Why I Write Children's Stories" is the best. It caught my attention from start to finish.
Personal Experience:l realized that I can create with my writing. I was blessed to return to college a few years ago where I did well in writing. Now I'm writing on a different level.
Feelings/Like:I like how the author encourages his audience to "do what you love" in order to be happy and earn money. I like how you include your daughters in your story telling. That is a good legacy to leave for them.
Impression:I am impressed with your songwriting success. It is great that you are continuing it by writing children's stories.
Suggestions:I suggest that you continue to encourage people to follow their dreams. I appreciate your sharing your success with us.
I enjoyed reading this poem. I was impressed by the author's admittance of how quickly wrong words can ruin relationships. It's not easy to confess our faults.
I can relate to your poem. I am reminded of how I usually say words that I should think about before speaking them. Even as I write this review, I could use a piece of tape across my mouth.
I would like to suggest that more emphasis be stressed upon the title, i.e., use of bold type. Communication is so important. Also,
be sure to watch the spelling of receive. Follow the rule: i before e except after c.
Great poem about the effects of communication. Keep up the good work.
The words of this poem bring sad feelings to my mind for the woman who is reaching out to her companion who longer finds her looks appealing. He is only interested in all work and no fun. The couple's roller coaster feelings seem to have caused a break in their love for each other.
The poem reminds me of most relationships that start out vibrant and fresh. Many times the magic diminishes after a while and the thrill is nowhere to be found. When there is an absence of nurturing, the flame of love will soon go out.
In the beginning, this poem gives a message of hopelessness. It ponders the thought that there is no heavenly Creator. There is an indication that faith no longer matters.
Although, there is a mysterious leading of how the author's feelings project dismay, a glimmer of hope springs forth. It seems that the seeds of faith planted within brought forth a harvest of hope.
Keep writing great poems that encourage and inspire. I enjoyed your poem's mysterious twist.
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