hey i liked your poem. It's good to read and personally i felt it has a sense of security in it.
you may find that funny ... i don't know. but that's how i felt..
it's too good..
hey please review my work if possible...
hey your way of writing is good. to be frank i was actually searching just to review anything, so that i'll get a review too from the writer.
but after reading this, i'm glad i read it.
though there is no much story, in this part, it is interesting and the reader would mostly want to read the next part.
even i'm new to writing. so i can't give any criticism, but as far as i know a good reader is the best critic...
by reading your novel, i can definitely say that this is your 1st or second novel ...
there are some grammatical mistakes i feel, no offence. i wish i'm wrong...
other i felt mentioning the man's height more than 5 1/2 feet was a bit odd, it's better to simply use 5 or 6...
i liked some of your lines too much...
they were so professional
don't forget to see my portfolio, pls..
some feel it's rude to ask this way.. but i call it frank.. lol...
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