This is a very gentle poem, and an excellent acrostic.
However, I feel that the words, "beyond repair, " messes with the flow that was very profound until then, but you do slide right back into that easy fluid read right after.
At the end I get the feeling of being unfinished, that you either said too much, or not enough.
All and all it was very gorgeous piece, and I'm glad I read it.
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