Here is a comment on chain letters sent by e mails and most of us follow its instructions to forward to so many people in response to it we might get some unseemly rewards, We follow this blindly, and the author is calling it as a gullible act, it may be but since we don't see any harm init we do it, not everybody believes in it. but the neighbor forces you to mall to gain some odd gifts from the shops, you find it very odd because you are forced to do it. I'm sure the author is aware of all the reasoning but she wants to to clarify her views with readers.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.
A new form of poetry here -A Hiaku Sonnet- never read before. It's a sad story of a loss of a friend to Alzeimer like disease, where the mind is lost with all the memories or identities.
A flow is good, and a loss is emotional turmoil, one finds it hard to bear, but everybody is helpless here. and hard to find a solution to the problem.only thing is left is rosy memories and good times once experienced in the friendship. Those days are gone for ever and can't be caught again.One has to face the fact without an alternative.
A good read,
Jaya H.
it 's a reality of empty nester. all holidays feel the same without the family around, they feel like not any special from everyday life, but that's the way it's. there is no alternative , everybody goes through the life this way, it's not avoided. but to live life gracefully is in anybody's hand.
A flow of the poem is good and theme is excellent.
A good read,
Jaya H.
Love can change the person, In this case one gets fearless, may be a shy person got the courage once the relationship becomes intense. and the personalities rubbed each other with transfer of characteristics for both. It 's written as it comes in mind, with no attention to grammar here.
An interesting job,
Jaya H.
It's weird fiction for Halloween late night show. Never really heard of Zombie, who is in reality. The questions raised by the host of the show are very valid and one wonders who got hold of Zombie to appear as it is. It must be all imaginary as most of the fictions are.
It moves well, and keeps a reader interested up to the end.
A good read,
Jaya H.
The thought process is not very focused in this piece. It doesn't read like poem but scattered prose. It's emotional but not very clear of any expression of love.
It seems there is cry for escape from the situation ,but confusion takes over there without any clear way out of the confusion
an interesting piece,
Jaya H.
A person uses yard work to vent his/her anger, this is in the description of poem. That's a good way to release the angry feelings if one can be thoughtful enough. The poem describes the perfect actions of yard work with the instruments used to accomplish that. A flow is good, but no rhythm or rhyme noticed,may be it's not appaling to the subject matter.
A good read,
Jaya H.
A stormy poem . it flows well but no rhyme or rhythm noted. Why the storm considered The mother Nature's gift , is not clear to me. all sorts of wonders are possible by the nature, it's unpredictable but the force is unbelievable as it's depicted in the poem.
A good read,
Jaya H.
it's the Nature's night dance in snow, is what is pictured in this poem. The picture is painted well with great imagination.It's dreamy but nightmarish idea which is suggested here is hard to believe in.I liked the end best:
When morning’s sun rises,
sparkles dance on a blanket
left by snowfall’s nighttime waltz.
A good read,
Jaya H.
This essay is written with a light touch. It talks about the parental relationship with the teenager child ,to create a trust in child's mind decides the relationship's nature, close or open. When teenager speaks freely with a parent, their worries disappeared in thin air for each one of them.The last sentence' She talks with me. What a blessing that is!' The emotions in this essay are expressed strongly.
A good read,
Jaya H.
a very informative essay which really introduces the steam technology for general reader who doesn't know any thing much. All is known about the steam is it generates energy but this essay tells us how and when the energy used in new technology.The research by Dr. Gloriosky will clarify more on this but for general public, whatever information is collected in this essay is more than enough, any more interested readers can follow Dr. Gloriosky 's research more closely.
An informative essay,
Jaya H.
A poem on very different topic . I never read or write on dragon. but was curious to read this poem and it was totally new experience for me. The form used here is popular with romantic poetry but I flows well here. writing about imaginary dragons is hard but imaginations can cross borders which is shown in this poem.In this fantasy, the selection of words is good, and the 'last fight'seems to be flowing smoothly.
A good read,
Jaya H.
The acrostic moves well with emotional expression of healing , The title is very appropriate and it talks about relationship with friends and living with others solves the the major distress and poem implies is that is God'swill to be together.the last four lines tells the whole message. The free verses constructed with no particular fashion but as the thought process takes it, but it conveys the feelings and focused on the subject on hand. The rules of Acrostic are followed well and overall it's a good read,
Jaya H.
A poem to remind us the old days. current situations are irresponsible and have lost the major values the nation stands for. It seems we need help on every front. the poem spells out all the problems but believing in one man won't save us, because damages are can't be fixed with one's policies which worked in past but may not be correct for the new age.
A good read,
Jaya h.
It's a good write-up on the pay it forward bear club.I hope it still exists on WDC. The idea is great and work is not elaborate but simple enough for anyone to do,and everybody appreciates the results.I didn't know ROAK originated here but it does make sense after reading the write-up. I just approached them for maintaining my membership but need to talk to them again in a moth or so.This is very informative article, glad I came across it. I got many friends here though never met them in person.Though it feels great.
A good read,
Jaya H.
The story with the great moral here. It's written well with a good plot and developed with expert dialogue. The end was unexpected until one reads it through. A topic is unusual, I'm glad it's not a love story. The fiction gives the reader a hope of kindness is still around, everything is cruel in the society. That feel good feeling is at the core of the story. The character development was done well. It starts and ends at the right moment , no elaborate plots or events. It's simplicity is what makes it good read.
Jaya H.
It's a good inspirational Acrostic based on the memories about the grandson. his name in what it reads in a poetic way. The flow is good and it depicts the picture of the memory from grandson's childhood which is very realistic way to put in the words.Though it may read like a prose, the pride to be a grandparent to the successful grandson is very touching.
A good read,
Jaya H.
a poem on words using word to express the thoughts. There are so many mixed thoughts here that it's hard to get a message out of them. words usually are tangible force if used for one's advantage, it can bring love, hate, fear , hope etc -all kinds of feelings in ones mind, as the mind chooses words can create a new relationship and can guide one through it. That's exactly what I red in this poem. The topic is interesting and flow is not always smooth here, but it suits the poem and it came out good.
A good read,
Jaya H.
It's hilarious way to picture the corporate ladder.It may be in poetic presentation but lot of is prose here which could be allowed for rapper. the picture depicted here may be realistic , but as a reader I'm new to this setting so can't really comment on any of this dialogue.
an interesting work,
Jaya H.
A free verse runs more like a prose than poem. The love of the god is filtered through every line.The surrender to his feet is so complete that no other world is visible. for him to accept is the prime goal in this poem with a strong belief in him is enough to live this life. the poetic prose is by choice or it just happened? it is clear with the message and flow is good if not to wordy, the poem with a few words would have been more powerful but at the same time the expression carries through the long words.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.
it seems you are truly a devoted reviewer.Most of us review to get GPs. which helps to upgrade the membership, year after year.your experience on WDC is very similar to most of us. You have to find your niche on here and need some unknown mentor available on the site itself. If you are lucky , somebody does look after you and guide you step by step.you are on the road of enjoyment as it is, many more years to go by here and you will be mentoring newbies all the time. you have a great attitude and will be a real help to many newcomers on WDC.
An interesting work ,
Jaya H.
A poem at the time when nation is divided. the unsafe nation is not like it meant to be. How to avoid violence?when violence is non stoppable , there is no solution on hand, deciding the helpless human all over. The message of love is useful but how to teach them is the question. the one who tries by example is surrounded by fear of own safety. no neighborhood is safe anymore crime scenes are everywhere, no race, color matter the new administration is adding fuel to the crime rate. The flow of the poem is good, with rhyming scheme throuout.
A good read,
Jaya H.
The view is well expressed in this essay. but there is another angle to this argument.The two battles mentioned here are too technical. The common resident of the country does not think so deeply, but change it affects him personally.The America is divided , culturally as well as politically. political division is expressed here. but the argument is not complete to the core of the society. I believe there are lot of unsaid matters involved here. It's difficult to solve many problems by selecting one side over other.
An intersting work,
Jaya H.
It's tea-lover's thoughts written in this essay with choice of tea, with names and brands. In hot weather drinking tea can't be pleasurable to me but everybody is different , everyone has different kind of cup of tea, some waiting for teatime and rewind.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.
once is enough to slip on a slippery path, once heart is broken, it takes a long time to mend, it can be repaired provided the other one has a strong mind and strength to tolerate a blow to the heart with loving consideration and patience .Sometimes the of strength and selfish attitude can deny to pardon, it's then tough situation.
An interesting topic,
Jaya H.
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