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Review of Internet Upgrade  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Interesting story line here. I enjoyed the way it built and the melodrama/comic aspect had just the right feel. I could see someone setting this up as a bit on Saturday Night Live or Mad TV.
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Review of Got Milk?  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Oh my, this was wonderful. You have the child's "voice" down perfectly and you can actually hear this poor father's exasperation. The bit about restraining orders was a great touch. This had me biting my tongue so I wouldn't wake my husband laughing! Absolutely wonderful and now I'm looking forward to the sequel! Keep up the great work!
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
What an introduction! I already like Hoolie and his banter with the knight was quite well done. Their conversation felt genuine and true to the time period as well. I really liked the opening paragraph, using the seasons to depict Hoolie's feelings. I'm looking forward to reading more of Hoolie's exploits. I have to admit though that the web thing gave me the willies! Yikes. Keep it up!
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Review of shadow puppets  
Rated: E | (3.5)
I love the emotions expressed here, both the pleasant memory and the analogy of relationship to shadow puppets. I had trouble with the formatting though - it felt awkward to me as I read it. However, that's only an opinion and overall I really enjoyed the poem. Keep it up!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wordsy, I enjoyed your ramble. It took me back to experiences of my own. I'm continually amazed at how easy it is to blurt out what I'm thinking without thinking! Your words clearly express the feelings that I've experienced when I've opened my big mouth without thought.
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