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Review of Charon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Shika/Noah,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the Ferryman who shuttles souls across the River Styx to their eternal fate. The reader is fascinated with the look they get at this figure and his opinion of the job he does. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The Villanelle poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Searing Silence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Star,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with frustration. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who would love to shed their anger forever. I would love to not feel anger, even though I have found constructive ways to deal with it. Anger serves no purpose. It just causes conflicts. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Nothing At All  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi TheNoMonster,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the speaker's wish will be granted even though it is not for him. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a man worries that a wish he made to a genie will not be granted because it involves the mother of his friend and not him specifically. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi bluemonkeyslippers,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with confusion, suspicion and revulsion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what has taken the kids and why. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a group of children has gone missing and two investigators try to find out what has happened to them. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Review of Eternal Serenade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sylvie,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of passion and love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a person who adores their romantic partner and finds all the joy and contentment they need in this person's arms. I am hoping that this relationship endures. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Amy,

This is a fantastic article. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the article. Anyone thinking about or applying to university will anxiously begin to read to find out more. You introduce the topic by telling the reader exactly what they will learn in the article. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about what universities should be giving to their students. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of That's impossible  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Beyond Words,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of disbelief. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering Lily's wish will be granted. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a woman who learns a great deal about her life from an old pocket watch. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on Lily, and she comes across as a real person. There is only one line of dialogue, and it is well done and realistic. Lily speaks like a real person. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of New Beginnings  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Crissy,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with hope and love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. In the poem, a spouse reflects on their marriage after the loss of the other spouse. It looks like this relationship was a very happy one. I am so glad to see that and hope that the speaker will get the comfort and love they need. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sylvie,

This is a fantastic essay. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the essay is actually about. They will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the essay without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about the strength is just asking someone if they are okay. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of The value of time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi writer,

This is a wonderful essay. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the essay is actually about. They will begin to read right away to find out. You launch into the essay without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about not wasting your time. The reader is delighted with the look they get at your thoughts on the matter. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Diet Dying Days  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi AmyJo,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with anxiety and worry. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is worrying about their diet as they face an upcoming holiday dinner. We all have to forego our weight loss regimen during holidays at one time or another. I am hoping that the speaker will find a way to get back their good habits after the holiday. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi ivey,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is beseeching and full of pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a young girl confessing her sins as she vows to improve her relationship with God. This poem reminds me of myself. I have been searching for a way to be closer to God. My religion was not helping me in this matter. I decided to find my own way. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Trash Cats  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Laurie,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the life and plight of stray cats. I wish I could take in all the stray cats of the world and give them a safe, loving home. I try to support the SPCA as much as I can. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Akestra,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's' attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about not letting anything quash your desire to write. I write everyday and don't let anything stop me. I love to express myself this way. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Cobwebby,

This is a fantastic review. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the review. You launch into the review without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the review. They will read to the last word. You have reviewed the book Harold And The Purple Crayon. The reader is delighted to find out what reading you are doing and how you are enjoying your challenge. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the review tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi David,

This is a fantastic introduction to your book.

The blurb is fabulous. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the book is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to find out more. You launch into the blurb without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the blurb. They will read to the last word. You have given the reader a synopsis of your novel. The reader is delighted with the look they get at your novel. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the blurb tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader.

You have also included the first chapter. The chapter opens with a description of Lyra's excited state. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on Lyra and the chapter. They will read on to know more about her. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. You have set up your main character and plot very well for the reader. The dialogue is well done and realistic. Lyra speaks like a real person. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The chapter focuses in Lyra, and she comes across as a real person. Great job.

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Review of Fragile  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Diva,

This is a fantastic chapter. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the chapter is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the chapter without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the chapter. They will read to the last word. You have written about how venting your feelings can have other people seeing you as just sensitive. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the chapter tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Brenda,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with love and sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about your grief at losing someone that you loved. We have all lost someone we loved at one time or another. My heart goes out to you, and I hope you received the love and support that you needed during this difficult time. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi SandraLynn,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is light and informal. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem celebrates carrots and their goodness. I love vegetables of every kind, but dinner seems to be missing something if there are no carrots. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Holy Sanctum  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kodah,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with serenity but is still formal. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the peaceful place in your mind you visit from time to time in your life. We all have that happy place either within our minds or in the real world which gives us peace from the tension in our lives. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Gravestone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi ridinghood-p.boutilier,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is slightly sinister. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who visits a beach to gather stones. The reader is wondering what these stones will be used for. They will read to the last word to find out. Is it for some nefarious purpose? The reader is utterly fascinated. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Love Poem  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi ForeverDreamer,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of love and joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about two people who are in love, happy, and believe they are brought together by God. I am so full of joy for this couple and hope they continue to have a happy life and union. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Relief  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Auri,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with suspicion and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the people in the video are being menaced. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a group of people who are being treated for the same disorder characterized by extreme paranoia. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of The Locked Door  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Ikiya Sama,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of confusion and fear. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what lies behind the door Benjamin never goes into. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a boy wonders why there is a room in his house which is only entered by his father and is always locked. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Beholden,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is tinged with confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what Tanner has inherited from his Great Uncle. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a man who comes to his Great Uncle's Will Reading only to get a strange, and eerie bequest. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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