this was good. i like how its described. its exactly how some people feel after being intimate in any way with someone only to wake the next day to find them gone or that it wasn't a big deal for them. good work. keep writing.
wow. this was very descriptive. it just makes me think of so many people i know who feel this way, even myself at one time. people don't know that the ones that look happy sometimes really aren't because they don't have a better half to share themselves with. i loved this. keep writing.
this was sweet. it reminds me of me and my fiance since i am older than him i know what its like to watch or kind of wait for someone you have feelings for to mature on the level that you are on. so this was very well written. good work.
wow thats crazy. i'm actually getting married next year so it kind of makes you think about who you will be spending the rest of your life with. i thought this was an interesting spin on "til death do us part"
this was cute. it reminds me what a lot of high school guys think when they like a girl alot and their friends are trying to get him to talk to her. its almost like you watch her move in slow motion from the way you describe her. this was nice. keep writing.
this definetly describes how some people really look beneath beauty to see the real truth. and sometimes whatever looks so pretty on the surface can really be a mess underneath. this was nice
i love it. it reminds me of my first love. even though you may move on with someone new or the other person is no longer with you, you still carry that love for them and nothing you encounter after that can measure up to that feeling you will have for this person for the rest of your life. you wrote this beautifully.
this was nice. i like how you are explaining what you feel like when there is someone you really want to talk to but you can't. man i have felt like that so many times. this was on point. truly.
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