This is indeed an emotional and did touch my heart. As a reader the poem expresses the disparity of races so very delicately and directly. Though with restriction on actual event we really feel the deep emotion and despair all so eloquently put. And all this with lyrics and perfect rendition of a song is creativity at its best. Very interesting and will remain in our hearts and mind the injustice metted during those time...sindbad
This is a nice and creative story. Jasmine the title is indeed perfect and all the plot with so simple a setting and as a reader I was in a era that remained a favourite time. The type of change and all the developments to get to a changed life is indeed creative and worth appreciating...sindbad
This is a nice and creative story with a dialect that did remind readers the old era and the rich language and words that was a important part as well. As a reader I was intrigued by the hold on classical language and attention to details on minute things that were adhered and the whole story came like a song to the readers. So many things expressed in so few a words. Great job indeed...sindbad
This is a nice and interesting chapter and the way the initial paragraph was written, the readers got fimiliarize with their memory of getting up fresh the next day with so much of activity and intoxication that happened the previous night. The role of Jody was equally colorful. Overall a great chapter to start with a new action that's going to happen shortly ..sindbad
Coffee monkey is indeed humorous take on morning ritual and one constant, a cup of hot coffee. The way you started the story with seeking help from animal kingdom and unique explanation regarding keeping a trained monkey instead of a pet dog is worth appreciating. Here in India there is a she monkey she does restaurant chores like cleaning utensils, cleaning the kitchen and the restaurant within routine time and clearing the table after customer has finished their meal. All this captured in a video, I wish I could have shared the video as well. Though the monkey was not a pet monkey but appeared in the restaurant on its own and started doing the chores, all this by observing people doing all this regular chores. So this story does give reader hope that anything is possible...sindbad
This is a nice and creative story as the life goes on, and all the things revolving around this theme is very interesting and breathtaking. The accident and the chapter one with so many intricate details are interesting and mind boggling till the end. The words or review will not justify the story with wonderful ending as well...sindbad
All your stories are out of the world, the strengths of your story are, very strong interpersonal relations and what all are expected and perfectly adhered by all the character, clear communication of the interpersonal skills that gives an impression that this story has been picked from a routine household, the emotional moments or tragedy or happiness are so very well expressed as if you are living those moments. Such natural and humane touch is very difficult to come by and all this makes the story memorable to read and appreciate. I am indeed lucky and happy to go through your portfolio and your stories...sindbad
Life is beautiful indeed, though we need a constant dose of inspiration and can do attitude. This is a beautiful story of Mrs Acorn and her positive attitude though life did throw so many hurdles and she handled all with best of dignity. The way Les and his life changed all did reflects the damages and fallout of a war. I was thrilled and amazed that so many things unfolded in this story from a career in nursing to do many events all mind boggling and yet Mrs Acorn survived all and created a beautiful and positive Life for herself and her family. Great story indeed...sindbad
Like all your stories this story did leave a high impact. The emotional impact and the way your story though continues in a normal pace comes up with sudden shock or impact that enhances the reading quotient and top it up with follow up moral strength or sacrifice or unknown elements that readers never expected, lights up the ending and as a reader we all take away something unique and positive from your stories...sindbad
This is a nice and scintillating love story. The unique environment and the way the surrounding changes leaves a deep impression in the mind of readers. These stories are a treasure to be kept in one's library and I will do just that. Great story with love and magic does a wonderful here...sindbad
This is a nice and creative story and as a reader I did get the feeling of reading a series of star trek, with all the elements of excitement and interest in creating such a marvelous set up with nail biting sequel. I am indeed indebted and grateful to read such and incredible story..sindbad
Just a walk in the park starts with a innocent and interesting story. The main character and his innocent and simple discovery while taking chase his favorite dog for a walk in early morning. The way the story unfolds with unpredictable events and their wonderful picturize writing skills put the readers interest awe and enjoy the unconventional ending. Great job indeed for this unique and interesting style, allowing readers to take somethings that they can easily relate to from your stories...sindbad
This is a nice story with a unique dialect and a popular free flowing style. As a reader I feel the free flow and easy going manner will appeal to all readers alike. I must applaud the interesting and simple story line you have come up with here that will appeal to mass readers. Great job indeed..sindbad
This is an interesting story with nice reflection on events, so true to the time the events represented. The dialogues and the accent and all did leave a deep impression in the mind of the readers. I was part of that era while reading the story. The way Skrie handled the situation or the role Malusk or Geordo played was impressive and worth remembering. Great job indeed...sindbad
This is a nice and interesting story about Dani and overall each paragraph did create one of the most interesting story and all the events happening enhance the reading experience. I will advise you to create subsection here with brief description about the characters that will enhance the reading experience...sindbad
This is a poem you wrote about a women's genre that inspired you in theme 3 of merit badge magic. I can see you did follow the instructions perfectly to present such perfect a poem. Though the word choice like favorite home, tremendous danger, mortgage property, are dynamic and does blend perfectly and enhances the direct augur of the poem. I will encourage you to bring some more imagination in the poem that can compensate the catchy title My "sweet heaven".And poem did adhere to the theme as well, great job..sindbad
This story in spanish has some nuances and as the story has sensuous and erotic input, they were better highlighted and defining here. The reason I wanted to leave a review is the gravity of emotions and sensuous acts are very well demonstrated here. Overall a delightful and sensuous addition here...sindbad.
This is nice and rather unconventional story of Nemona and her feet, and all the erotic things thoughts and actions that were so well focused with realistic portray of the pain, the pleasure of the action. All this and more did excit my senses and I did flow with the moments of events happening suddenly or randomly or with preconceived plot all very well connected and significantly became a very interesting and erotic story. I have read your other stories and interactive contents, all stories and contents are written and executed by a professional person, who knows the limits and aspirations of each charcter...sindbad
Sleepy Hollow is a impressive and rather creative take on headless one and his curse. So very well expressed with words like- For the headless one still rides the hollow nightly
Follow fast the path to that old covered bridge...Such vivid picture and readers who have seen similar incidents in movies will appreciate the word choice. Great job indeed...sindbad
Foiling an ambush us a creative and rather interesting story with so many things happening and all the different possibilities these actions will unfold in the future is so very well written and structured here. As a reader I happily lived in your world and did understand the long term sustenance of this story. Great job indeed...sindbad
This is a nice and interesting story with link to young girls and their predicaments. The future and so many creative options that leaves readers to add inputs that effects their lifestyle the most or they like to write or discuss about such topics. Overall I am interested in adding story on a returning student happy to be back on campus...sindbad
This is a nice poem or prose that expresses all the love, warmth, solace, dreams and thoughts pinpointed towards the missing component. All this love that time cannot sever is so beautifully expressed from different natural angles like eastern wind sigh or oceans endless song or lighthouse beacon on love's distant shore or the anchor in tides that churn or roar. All this and more so beautifully expressed, as a reader I did fall in love with each and every sentence. The longing and its love component has been expressed in free flow here. All the best...sindbad
This is a nice and enlightening story with perfect and creative twists and kept me perfectly glued to the whole plot and happening around. Dani and her story is indeed inspiring and wonderful sequence of happening has some element of a great story. I encourage you to continue on this matter. This is a great and fruitful effort needs to be appreciated in so few a word...sindbad
This sequel with redeeming voice and interesting twist with the mystery of the passage and the way Prince Sano has been portrayed is indeed creative. Overall this sequel shares lot of facts events and happening things that keeps reader on their toe. I really enjoyed the gravity and sensitivity amidst so many activity happening in this story and I thinks this sequel works or creates a foundation for the next stories and unfolding of larger plot. Great going and am eager to move to the next sequel...sindbad
The book and the story I did read was worth all the best of script I have ever come across. The words like I could leave right now, head west and ride for days.' he thought. 'But, that wouldn't save them.' Enhances the reading experience and all. This is indeed a very interesting sequel...sindbad
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