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I used a template for all of my reviews. I will comment on plot, characters, scene/setting, grammar, and anything else that comes to mind.
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short stories, novels, and blog
Favorite Genres
dark fantasy and horror However, I will read anything that is similar to a VC Andrews story. I also like any books about cooking.
Least Favorite Genres
romance, comedy, mystery, science fiction
Favorite Item Types
short stories, novels, blogs, anything about cooking
Least Favorite Item Types
poetry, campfires
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Romance, action-adventure, mysteries/thiller, science fiction
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Review of Softly!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Trick or Treat! I am here again to give you a treat and review your poem on behalf of Showering Acts of Joy, Angel Army, and WDC Frontliners. I loved the romantic tone to this poem. It was romantic without being sappy. Thanks for sharing and write on!

Sister of Mercy
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Review of Write On  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Trick or Treat! I am here to review your poem on behalf of Showering Acts of Joy, Angel Army, and WDC Frontliners. It's so much fun to read acrostic poetry. The second stanza stood out to me the most because no matter how hard the day is I always want to write. Thanks for sharing and write on!

Sister of Mercy
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Review by very thankful Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Trick or Treat! I am here again to review another story idea on behalf of Showering Acts of Joy, Angel Army, and WDC Frontliners. Vampires in space, what a neat idea! The vampire angel reminds me of the show I've been watching called True Blood. Thanks for sharing this and good luck with it.

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Review of Time Warped  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Trick or Treat! I am reviewing your story idea on behalf of Showering Acts of Joy, Angel Army, and WDC Frontliners. I like this story idea. I think it has many possiblities. It made me think of a sci-fi version of Rip Van Winkle, how he went to sleep and woke up twenty years later after everything had changed. Thanks for sharing this and good luck with it.

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Review by very thankful Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Trick or Treat! I have come to visit your port to give you a review on behalf of Showering Acts of Joy, Angel Army, and WDC Frontliners. I love reading haikus and poems about nature. The way you began the poem was my favorite part of it because it got my attention. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

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Review by very thankful Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is an interesting piece on blogging that I came across in your port. I thought about my own writing as I read this. I keep an online journal and make public entries in it at least twice a week or more. I could really relate to topics two and three. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review of Gimme That Check!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I came across this in your port looking for something to review for the Angel Army. I felt the same way about my ambitions when I was in my teen, just give me the money. Now, after having twenty-seven poems published, I just like having my words in print to be shared with other readers. Thanks for sharing and write on!

Sister of Mercy
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I am here to shower you with an act of joy with this review from the Showering Acts of Joy Forum. This is a simple poem that captures the emotions of a person caught up in a moment. I liked your use of alliteration in the fourth line, and your use of repetition toward the end. Thanks for sharing and write on!

Sister of Mercy
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Review of It's a Surprise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I am the Angel here again to review another poem in your port. God does have his own plans for us, and his mysterious timing in revealing them. I like the way you relay God's word about this topic. It is very refreshing! I really love the fact that you begin and end the poem the same way. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review by very thankful Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am one of the Angel Army here today to review a poem from your port. I was so moved by this poem. Yes, we often are caught up in life and forget what it means to be a child of God. I loved your use of alliteration in this poem. This flow was nice too. Thanks for sharing and write on.

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Review of The White Board  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I am here to shower you with an act of joy on behalf of the Showering Acts of Joy Forum. I loved reading your blog. I especially enjoyed your entries about the poetry reading and the one with the pic of your dog, Bear. He reminded me of a little dog I had when I was a child. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review of I Notice  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I am here to shower you with an act of joy on behalf of the Showering Acts of Joy Forum. This is such a beautiful poem. This made me melt as I read it. I loved the way the lines flowed back and forth. You made good use of repetition too. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review by very thankful Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Here I am again, an angel from the Angel Army to review another poem from your port. I can relate to this poem. I have felt this way at different times in my life. I have often seen people walk right by me, and they treat me like I am not even there. After a while, I got to a point where I didn't speak above a whisper for awhile. Thankfully I got over it. Thanks for sharing this. It meant a lot!

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Review of I Am Not Here  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am an angel from the Angel Army reviewing a poem from your port today. This is a wonderful short, but powerful poem about how God gives us blessings that we take for granted. Yes, they all do belong to him, and we all do tend to forget that! Thanks for sharing this and write on!

Sister of Mercy
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Review of Namaste  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Here I am again to shower you with an act of joy on behalf of the Showering Acts of Joy Forum. This poem makes good use of repetition and has good flow. I liked the imagery throughout the poem. The last stanza was the one that stood out to me the most. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review by very thankful Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Here I am again begin an angel and lingering a while longer in your port. That was some kind of dream you had. It sounds like some of the ones I have. I think the dream is telling you that you do not value yourself enough. This is just my interpretation. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I saw your port featured on the Angel Army Review Forum and thought I would be an angel and review some pieces for you. Blogs are so cool to read. I liked being able to read how what another author goes through when it comes to getting published, to me the waiting after sending off a submission is the worst. I loved seeing the pics of your son. He is so cute! Thanks for sharing this and write on!

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Review of Listening  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I am here again to shower another act of joy through the Showering Acts of Joy Forum. I really liked your use of repetition, and the format of this poem. The third stanza was the one that really stood out to me. I liked how the poem ended too. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review of Garden of Eden  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Here I am once again to shower you with an act of joy by the way of the Showering Acts of Joy Forum. I liked the way you took the story of Eve and made it into a poem. I liked the way you portrayed the regret of her actions. The only mistakes I see are in the first stanza, line four, you have unneccessary spaces between couldn't and "and". Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review of Winter's Breath  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I am here once again to shower you with another act of joy on behalf of the Showering Acts of Joy Forum. I like the way you compare winter to a lover's touch. I also like the use of alliteration in the second line of the first stanza. I like the gentle way you end the poem, too. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I am here again to shower you with another act of joy on behalf on the Showering Acts of Joy Forum. I love the way this poem rolls of the tongue as I read it. The second stanza is my favorite because of the descriptions you use. The last line of that stanza really stands out to me. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review of Calling  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I am here to shower some joy and to be an angel and review a poem for you. This poem has so many emotions for such a short one. The first one chills me to the bone while the second one makes me feel great sorrow. Thanks for sharing this and writing on!

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Review of Moving  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The angel strikes angel to float around in your port and review your article on behalf of the Angel Army. This would make a better poem than an article if the format were changed. The words read so smoothly and have a great flow. Yes, writing .com is a great place to move and settle down. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review of The Nap  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Here I am, still playing around in your port. I chose another piece to review on behalf of the Angel Army. This reads so smoothly that it makes me want to take a nap, but in a good way. Your writing is enchanting. I only saw a few mistakes. Make sure that your contractions have appostrophes and not question marks in them. Ex: don?t should be don't. Combine your first two sentences by cutting out the "an afternoon" from the second sentence. This will eliminate repetition. There were a few comma errors. Just make sure if you have a coordinating conjunction that you have a comma before it if both sides can stand alone as sentences. Otherwise, good job and thanks for sharing. Write on!

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Review of Restless  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Here I am again reviewing something from your port on behalf of the Amgel Army. As I played around your port, I found this nice little essay about a sleepless night. I have had many of those as an insomiac. Here are a few suggestions to make this a 5.0.
1. A comma is needed before a coordinating conjunction if both sides can stand alone as sentences.
2. Do not start a sentence with a coordinating conjunction.
3. "After only a few hours of sleep....." A comma is needed after sleep.
4. "On second thought......" A comma is needed after thought.

I hope this helps.

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