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Review by Slaytanna Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my, this was so funny. The person next to me was looking at me like I had gone mad. I love this, even if it is just nonsense. It flows well and has great imagery.
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Review of Logical Sense  Open in new Window.
Review by Slaytanna Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like this poem, both the tone and imagery are great. Good work!
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Review of I Miss You  Open in new Window.
Review by Slaytanna Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
First, let me say that I am sorry. But, I can relate. And this struck a nerve in me. I know that pain, and I can get this from the tone of the poem.

"I really need my dad

He was the one I blew steam off to

When I was mad"

This is really great, because I can relate to this too.

I love how this poem is very personal. Great job.
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Review of Cosmic Love  Open in new Window.
Review by Slaytanna Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was just beautiful. It flowed well and told an amazing story. While I was reading it I was saying to myself "please don't let her tell him she loves him" because I knew it would just tear out my heart strings. And it did, but I'm so glad that I read it because it was simply amazing. Thank you for writing this. Just, beautiful.
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Review of SH ANE  Open in new Window.
Review by Slaytanna Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I can feel the frustration in this poem. But I really like this poem. It is a free thought it is genuinely written. The only thing I feel the need to say is check your punctuation and grammar. But even then I still like it and got the full effect. And even if you are troubled with this 'battle' know that you are perfect, that people will say things, but if you're happy it doesn't matter what 'they' say.
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Review of Her Secret  Open in new Window.
Review by Slaytanna Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this poem. Because I can relate to this. I know how it feels to pretend like everything is cool, calm and collected. And I know how it feels to hide a big part of me from even friends. I'm afraid of what might happen if everyone knew everything. And this is why I like this poem. It's written from the heart and it's not trying to be a certain way. This is a sincere poem and is very deep and well written.
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Review of Wingéd  Open in new Window.
Review by Slaytanna Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very beautiful poem, it had great imagery and I was engrossed with it the entire time. It is very sweet and everyone who has had a 'silent crush' on someone knows how it feels to be too nervous to say anything. Any when the boy asks the birds "does it look like her" and she finally realizes he had been sculpting her the whole time. It's just very descriptive and tells a story that one can really visualize.
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Review of Freedom  Open in new Window.
Review by Slaytanna Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
The flow is great, stays on topic well. Very impowering and uplifting.
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