Slaytanna's (slaytona) Reviews

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#3770264

Review of KITTENS IN MY MITTENS

Review by Slaytanna

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Oh my, this was so funny. The person next to me was looking at me like I had gone mad. I love this, even if it is just nonsense. It flows well and has great imagery.

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#3764519

Review of Logical Sense

Review by Slaytanna

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I really like this poem, both the tone and imagery are great. Good work!

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#3764209

Review of I Miss You

Review by Slaytanna

Rated: E

| (5.0)

First, let me say that I am sorry. But, I can relate. And this struck a nerve in me. I know that pain, and I can get this from the tone of the poem.

"I really need my dad

He was the one I blew steam off to

When I was mad"

This is really great, because I can relate to this too.

I love how this poem is very personal. Great job.

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#3764197

Review of Cosmic Love

Review by Slaytanna

Rated: E

| (5.0)

This was just beautiful. It flowed well and told an amazing story. While I was reading it I was saying to myself "please don't let her tell him she loves him" because I knew it would just tear out my heart strings. And it did, but I'm so glad that I read it because it was simply amazing. Thank you for writing this. Just, beautiful.

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#3764190

Review of SH ANE

Review by Slaytanna

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I can feel the frustration in this poem. But I really like this poem. It is a free thought it is genuinely written. The only thing I feel the need to say is check your punctuation and grammar. But even then I still like it and got the full effect. And even if you are troubled with this 'battle' know that you are perfect, that people will say things, but if you're happy it doesn't matter what 'they' say.

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#3761099

Review of Her Secret

Review by Slaytanna

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I love this poem. Because I can relate to this. I know how it feels to pretend like everything is cool, calm and collected. And I know how it feels to hide a big part of me from even friends. I'm afraid of what might happen if everyone knew everything. And this is why I like this poem. It's written from the heart and it's not trying to be a certain way. This is a sincere poem and is very deep and well written.

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#3761078

Review of Wingéd

Review by Slaytanna

Rated: E

| (5.0)

This is a very beautiful poem, it had great imagery and I was engrossed with it the entire time. It is very sweet and everyone who has had a 'silent crush' on someone knows how it feels to be too nervous to say anything. Any when the boy asks the birds "does it look like her" and she finally realizes he had been sculpting her the whole time. It's just very descriptive and tells a story that one can really visualize.

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#3757576

Review of Freedom

Review by Slaytanna

Rated: E

| (4.5)

The flow is great, stays on topic well. Very impowering and uplifting.