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Review of Forgotten  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
You should include more detail. With what you havve I can't see your story in my head.
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Review of Grow Up  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Little more punctuation please. It'll slow the readers down so they can enjoy what they are reading.
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Review of If Only..  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Fun. That's the only word I can say for this piece.
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Review by PoisonIvy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like it, I mean every one feels that way don't they?
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Review of I Hate My..  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I've had similar escapades with siblings. I could totally relate. But for this story you might want to have a more childish view since the narrator is six, after all
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Review of As long as...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can feel your love of your father
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Review by PoisonIvy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
you might want to change your wording of "My body is s p a g h e t t i f i e d, elongated beyond perception." Other wise I loved it.
Keep on writing.
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Review of The Fat Outlaw  Open in new Window.
Review by PoisonIvy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This really made me laugh. I liked the way you made something usually so sad funny. Thanks for writing.

-Solace
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Review by PoisonIvy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
please write part two please. Like now. iwant to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review by PoisonIvy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
What is it about? this poem really left me confused so if you can please reply with an answer
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Review by PoisonIvy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Excellent writing............... But you need to work on spelling.
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Review by PoisonIvy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful. Keep writing. The world shouldn't be denied reading your work with awe.
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