This piece is a nice effort of yours to describe writing. There are a few grammatical and spelling mistakes though and I 'm sure you would like to correct them.
Sentence 6: 'They' also write ..........they want to look 'at it'.
Third last sentence: .....that 'take' drugs.
The second last sentence does not make sense in the end.
My suggestion for the title is 'How do people write?'
Cool! I think you should move part of the second line of the first stanza onto the next line.
Overall, it was really good. You should consider having your poems published. And if you do, don't forget to send me a copy....FOR FREE!
You have a nice theme there and well thought-out words but you might want to work out on the rhyming of the poem. In stanza three, last line, it would create a beautiful effect if you adjust the line so as to make 'stains', 'stained'.
Overall, it's very good. Keep up the good work!
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