I liked the previous chapters but this one is a bit of a left turn. You know the "fattened up" and "treated like an actual cow" buttons are separate options, right? Now any alternative to the "Natalie intends to have her daughter murdered and eaten as soon as she's no longer financially helpful" option is one prompted and accessed by a button for Gwen being treated more like a cow! There's no option for anyone who likes the angle of cow-girl transformation and the setup the previous chapters gave us other than this one where she goes on to be treated as livestock under constant threat of "keep making milk or I'll kill you" and weirdly has no objections to anything she goes through! You don't have to title a later chapter option "Gwen's insane mum is arrested" or anything, just maybe another direction at this stage would be nice
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