Great poem. Very inspirational! After your parting comment, I'm left to wonder exactly what the details are regarding this. However, it sounds like a personal matter and I wish you the best of luck. Truth is on your side, my friend. And keep writing!!!
This was very impressive. The only part I would question is where you mention the room getting smaller. It sounds like the subject is resigned to his/her fate instead of feeling closed in and restless. But that's just my point of view. Otherwise, it's really an excellent piece. I liked it very much. Good job!
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