I loved this! It was such a nice, sweet, funny and pure tale. Even with such a short story, you managed to make me feel attached to Bob and wondering what new misfortune was going to befall him. The way he "wasted" his wishes was so relatable because it was just a slip of the tongue. 10/10
This is a really sweet poem. What I like about it is how well you have captured the snapshots of many different lives which the bench sees. It makes me a little nostalgic for simpler times, and makes the reader feel compassion for the lonely inanimate bench! Thank you :)
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