Hi ya Dohm, this is a deep and meaningful peice - breathing of humanity and human nature. I find your use of rhythem and rhyme interesting and unexpected. Its not your run of the mill plodding poem, but makes you stop and consider what you have just read. I like this poem, well done.
All the best for 2006, from steph
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