Not bad, though formatting issues made it hard to understand. Everything was crushed together, making it difficult to read. Spelling was alright. 5/10. Consider this constructive criticism.
Excellent work. I haven't worked in retail or a restaurant, but, I know those who have. The things they have to put up with some times. It can be troublesome. 10/10.
Well done, even if the book that inspired it is one I haven't heard of. Also, I haven't been sailing in several years, real sailing, I mean. Still, excellent work. Gets a 10 out of 10.
Very interesting. Have to admit, I've heard of solitaire, never played it, though. I don't have OCD either. Glad it helps you, if you do indeed have it. 8/10.
Excellent. Glad the man was able to let somene in on secrets, and may have found a future wife as well. 10/10. I'd imagine his feelings are the same that many have about their own houses.
Short, but well done. Can't serve in the military, because of being physically disabled, but, I have a great respect for those who do serve, and have in the past.
Not bad, not bad at all. Men becoming women is rather funny, but, depending on te writing, can be creepy as well, drag and all. Still, awesome effort. 10/10.
Rather great effort, even if shrinking stories aren't a favorite genre of mine. Nothing personal, but, I often get stumped when adding to them. Haven't seen Pokemon for a while, so many characters major and minor, afraid I can't recall all of them from the Anime or games. Still, 10/10.
Something of a Shakespeare fan, though his writing style isn't easy to duplicate, but it can be done. An author wrote the Star Wars films in his style starting a few years ago, rather excellent, I must say. Fine effort on your part as well. 10/10.
I've tried the shrinking genre out, and, while it's not a favorite of mine, I do add to it when I can. Great effort, 10/10.
Don't get me wrong, I get it's a genre a lot of people like, but I can't seem to get interested in it, not sure why.
An impressive idea. Not sure where the contest thing itself is, but, I'm sure I could try it, if I have room in my portfolio to do it. I'll see if I do, and if so, make an attempt at this, if possible.
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