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Review of Amid the Corn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this.
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Review of Complex Numbers  Open in new Window.
for entry "Relax" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this. As I get closer to retirement, your perspective is encouraging. I can relate to the "outsider" perspective also.
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Review by SusanFarmer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I really like this poem. Captures our cultural climate to a tee.

As a reader, the last line is the only one that didn't work for me...I found myself mentally playing with ways to turn the line into a statement--such as: "Americans starve for acceptance" or "Why Americans starve for acceptance"

The way you have it may communicate exactly what you want to communicate; just sharing my musings...This is definitely a poem that both entertains and makes the reader ponder...


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
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Review of The Dove  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice....Thanks for completing the February challenge!
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Review of Haiku 0096  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very nice! I am including all your gift point for January 2015 (100 per poem for 31 poems) with this review. Thanks for writing and entering.... I truly believe that part of developing as a writer/poet is linked to the volume of poems that one writes! Again thank you!
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Review of Haiku 0065  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
thanks for writing...
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Review of Haiku 0032  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
thanks for writing...
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Review of Jewelry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
thanks so much for sharing your poems...
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Review of Haiku 0024  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
thanks for writing...
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Review of Ampitheater  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
thanks for writing...
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Review of Fire-pit  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
thanks for writing...
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Review of Ice  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
thanks for writing...
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Review of Flight  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
thanks for writing...
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Review of Siblings  Open in new Window.
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nice...
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Review of Thanksgiving  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
thanks for writing...
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Review of Autumn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
the first two lines paint a vivid word picture with the last line pulling the poem into focus...
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Review of Wisdom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
thanks for writing...
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Review of Blizzard  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
thanks for writing....
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Review of Growth  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
very nice....
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Review of Haiku 0023  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
thanks for writing...
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Review of Haiku 0022  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
thanks for writing....
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Review of Haiku 0021  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
nice...
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Review by SusanFarmer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
thanks for writing...
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Review of Arctic reminder  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
thanks for writing...
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Review of Haiku 0018  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice...
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