This is such a deep and amazing piece of poetry. I really liked how the rhyming words are chosen both relevant and yet they rhyme.
I hope I can write as good as you one day :)
Wow! It's really a nice piece of writing. I am sure that every one would've experience at least once in their life. Your writing was expressive and the words used were to the point, it was quite easy for me to experience what you went through.
I have a very minor point to make, there are 2 places where feel is misspelled as fell. I hope I didn't read it wrong. If so, please do enlighten me.
Thank you so much for asking me to review. (I am very poor newbie so could offer only better stars right now, I wish to offer better GPs when I grow rich. Please pardon me.)
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