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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
There is a some nice imagery in this poem. I like that you refer to the ground as Nature's floor. I would like to learn more of the background of the bagger, if you're interested in expanding this poem any. The line about "carrying my lifeless legs behind" as it creates a striking image.
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