i really like this. it is an interesting take on a topic close to heart about judging by outer appearances or material things (height, money, etc). as a short person, i really like the idea that being small is good. so to find a piece of writing that states that being small is good made me feel happy!
but as i was reading, a few lines made me well, sad. the part of "no one will ever climb, or swing for its branches;" made me think of loneliness and unhappiness. but overall, i liked your poem.
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