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Review of Words With Color  Open in new Window.
Review by tawandadatruth Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I feel that your thoughts on painting with words could be more drawn out. i found no spelling, grammatical, or puncuation errors. That's a big plus because I know I make them. Continue to write. I want to read more of your work and I invite you to view some of mine. Best wishes.
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Review by tawandadatruth Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed this piece. The only thing that kept you from a five was a spelling error. mabey-maybe.I think a simple edit will get you at five in no time. I think if you continue to write your feeling the way you are and be careful with your spelling and puncuation, each poem may recieve five stars. You certainly have the potential. Continue to write it works for you.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the poem but i'm not sure I agree with it's content completely.
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Review of Unbroken  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Try to use a little more descriptive, symbolism words to further describe your feeling.
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Review by tawandadatruth Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great poem. I oly found a few left out words and spell errors. Great job.
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Review of Mind Dance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the ryme pattern only it seemes your words flow a two different paces. Maybe if you try a constant rythmn it will help. The over all poem was great.
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Review of Bliss confessions  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I think if you add a little more descriptive words to support what your feeling it will help. My opinion only.
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Review of Longing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
No other word but perfect. You worded this piece ecellently. You're a wonderful writer.
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Review of Dear Abuser  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This needs no review other than fabulous. Your imagery
and creativity within your words left me feeling your very pain. Keep writing, your're great.
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Review of Falling Farther  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
One spelling error. I think if yor are more descriptive it will be less confusing.
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Review by tawandadatruth Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
i like your work but parts of it confused me a little. It was unclear to me what you meant at times.
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Review of My Hardest  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Amen! Your work speaks for itself.
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Review of Truth  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
We sure are lacking a lot of that. I like your rhyme pattern. You don't see that format used to often anymore. Keep up the good work.
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Review of Healing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Your feelings were so beautifully spoken. I only wish there were more to broaed our insight more.
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Review of The Voice of Hope  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I wouldn't change anything. It delivers how deep your feelings run and your feelings themselves are poetry waiting to be written. So continue to write sweetie!
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Review by tawandadatruth Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I think this poem is very cute. It looks like he got some poetry out of you after all. Ha Ha!
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Review by tawandadatruth Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
tHAT WAS BEAUTIFUL. WHOEVER YOUR FRIEND IS, THEIR PROUD OF YOU. KEEP YOUR HEAD UP AND CONTINUE TO WRITE. IT'S A TALENT THAT YOU A BLESSED TO HAVE.
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Review of Him  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
tHIS POEM WAS ABSOLUTELY, POSITIVELY GREAT. I WOULD LOVE TO VIEW MORE OF YOUR WORK. PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE.
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Review of Fool  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I LIKE YOUR POEM BUT I THINK IF YOU MAKE YOUR THOUGHTS CLEARER WE CAN FEEL YOUR PAIN MORE THROUGH YOUR WORDS.
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Review of Is It A Sin?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I enjoyed your poem very much. The way you desribed your emotins so broadly painted a clear picture in my head of what you were feeling. i must say I have been in those shoes also. continue to write you have great talent.
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