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2nd in balance of chaos - she was the light he craved

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Review of FIRST LOVE

Review by Telboy

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Hi,

Firstly you should listen to The Cure, if you are not already doing so.

Hurt, you have been. It comes across.

One swipe - the was more room for depth.

You led me in, I felt rather than feel.

I will read more. Thanks.

TL

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