I love your use of rhyming as the poem begins and the expressive words that you use throughout. As I read it out loud it sounded terrific and I could see this being in a children's poetry book. My favorite stanza was O but fall has arrived-hear the pumpkin patch sing! So descriptive. Nice job!
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