This was quite a thorough review of thes subject. However, there is no physical mailing address given, in order to remit payments via express carriers (which by the way, will not deliver to post office boxes). The alternate choice, is to remit funds via your Pay Pal method which would require the remitter to register with Pay Pal. Some remitters don't care for this type of electronic payment system. Thanks for listening.
POW-erful line, "...they inhabit us all from death to birth." This fully engulfs the premise of life after death. As we 'die to ourselves and our egos', we become more closely connected to the Creator thereby allowing the favor of GRACE into our hearts. The author of "The Grace of Jesus" gives us a new understanding of this POW-erful emotion. --LadyDJG
The movement in this piece is exceptional. The quiet and timely introduction of characters is well placed. Magdeleine's longing, pain, questions... and hesitations, were magically felt. And then the ultimate b-r-e-a-k-t-h-r-o-u-g-h happened. "Yes! I want to dance." This made my heart leap for Magdeleine's new revelation and freedom. Free, is good. LadyDJG
This spoke from the heart of history. A good, informative read that made tears wellup inside. I never did understand why THEY said a man named Columbus discovered a land already inhabited. --LadyDJG
Dear Jamuna: In your work "Separation," I connected immediately with your deep sense of longing and overall, I FEEL your pain. I was prepared to read a short story and this work is more like a short-short. I would like to see you embellish the piece with a bit of detailing showing the reader WHY this man was so special to you. We don't get a chance to connect with WHY your "rain and the flowers are not beautiful anymore" because the understory of his character is missing. Why did he leave? Is that an important detail for the reader to know -OR- is your perspective purposefully severing 'the nemises(sp.) character-- the other woman? If so, and if it your desire to focus only on the heartbreak of a lost lover, pull out the pen again and give us the juicy details to better understand how you and he related to one another. In so doing, we will FEEL your longing more profoundly. Hope this helps and keep on keepin' on with the writing. Your spiritual friend, --LadyDJG (Debra J. Gordon)
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