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Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed your story, it was quite an interesting fable balance between good and evil, how they balance one another out, because with out good, their can not be any evil,. however you left out certain words but that can easily be fixed with quick proof reading. good job and write on, kitty luster.
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Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed your story, it was unique and interesting, I liked the way you took something ordinary that child would not normallly be afraid of like fairies made them into, and showed them sometimes fairies are not always friendly. great job, write on. kitty luster
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Review of Blue Dragonflies  Open in new Window.
Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I liked your story very much, it is very sad and endearing,and in a way we all we could recieve some form of a form a message from our loved ones. write on. kitty luster
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Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
great story, i enjoyed it very much, I enjoy ghost stories they are so fun to read and to tell, but of course I enjoy being scared. so scare away, and write on. kitty luster.
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Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I like this version, its realistic and it kept me interested to the very end. I like the fact that you took something special like family togetherness and the love of family and made it ominous. good work. write on. kitty luster.
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Review of Wax  Open in new Window.
Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
great story, I like the fact that you took an everyday item like a candle and made into something ominous. good work. write on. kitty luster.
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Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked your story very much it kept me on the edge of my seat until the end however your story felt rushed in some parts especially in the beginning which felt like it was missing something, but I do that to, keep writing kitty luster.
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Review of The Geuji  Open in new Window.
Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed your story it was very imaginative and it kept me entertained keep writing kitty luster.
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Review of The Dark Alley  Open in new Window.
Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed your story, it kept and held my attention to the very end, I hope that you add the police man's side to this story it would be quite interesting. kitty.luster
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Review of A Dark Presence  Open in new Window.
Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This a good story i enjoyed very much, It had me interested to the very end and I would like to see more of your writing. gracie sands.
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Review of Hooked  Open in new Window.
Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed your story it was quite interesting to read, it was realistic and it kept me riveted to my seat until the very end, you know have good horror story when you make your audience jump at shadows, good job, however I hope I see more of your work. gracie sands.
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Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
that was a good story, it was realistic and I hope you continue to write. gracie sands.
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Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
this a good story I hope this is not all ur going to write, its realistic and riveting to the very end. gracie sands.
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Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I enjoyed your story it was realistic and entertaining, however the misspelled words made it hard to follow.gracie sands
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Review of The Wishing Well  Open in new Window.
Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed your story, It was realistic and dramatic. it also caught and held my attention. I liked the neo noir twist. k.l. breyer
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Review of Watching  Open in new Window.
Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed your story very much it was realistic and you have brought a new idea to the horror genre. keep writing because the more you do the better you'll get. k.l. breyer
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Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
your story is original and quite interesting. It captured my attention. I enjoyed what the story was about an egyptian myth there are few stories that are based on any type of myth. keep writing the more you do it the better you'll get. k.l. breyer
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Review of An Autumn Moon  Open in new Window.
Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great love story however when I first decided to read it I thought it would be a ghost love story, the story line leads the reader to believe this. keep writing though because the more you do it the better you'll become. k.l. breyer
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Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Your story was good and it touched on a genre that's seems to be fading, however in the first part of the story you seem to overstate the fact that these past twenty years you did this or that, You should only state this once, giving the story more of a believable concept, I have trouble spell checking to however it still needs to be done. keep writing though because the more you do it, the better you'll get.k.l. breyer
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Review of Innocence's Blood  Open in new Window.
Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
excellent story, I hope your going to add more to it. Because I am curious as to how it will end. K.L. breyer
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Review of Escape from hell  Open in new Window.
Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Awesome story, I hope you keep writing and add more to it. It kept me riveted to my seat. k.l. breyer
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Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This story was very cute, Its an idea that could gets interested in not only the dentist but their imaginations again.
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Review of Shadow of a Rose  Open in new Window.
Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very good story, it was entertaining and riveting, I enjoyed the fact you blended drama and horror genres together. keep writing. k.l. breyer
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Review of Soul Survivor  Open in new Window.
Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed your story very much, it was good and depicted reality, keep writing. k.l. breyer
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Review of Short of Daybreak  Open in new Window.
Review by kitty luster Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
your story was very good and kept me riveted it can either be a drama or horror. I would like to see which direction you take this story in. keep writing. k.l. breyer.
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