Wow, I like this because it describes what every girl goes through once their life. It kinds of also sounds like what I go through. Though my boyfriend doesn't cheat (I have) we have problems and I sometimes think that I am better off with my ex. But no one is perfect so I am trying to fix my relationship instead of running and giving up on my problems. Keep On Writing!
I really like this. Yes, it was short but very thought provoking. Were these people in a mental hospital? I remember when I was and we had to do group therapy. I think group therapy is a great way to get ready for life in the real world when you are in a hospital. Again, I lovedd this. Keep writing!
Wow, another case of abuse gone wrong..it's very sad. It's sad because this actually happens everyday and innocent people have to suffer everyday. Whether the victim was wrong or not..this should never happen. The people that do this to other people are sick and demented also. Good write. Write On!
This poem rises alot of questions in my mind. Were they put into the system? Did you get a divorce? These are just questions that come into my head. You don't have to answer them if they are too personal.
I love this poem. I have a drug addict in my family. It is sad. Temptation got to her and away she walked right with it. Thank you for this poem. It shows that temptation can take you. You have to beat it with an iron fist.
Wow, that brought tears to my eyes. I don't think no one should be abused, but we all have a guardian angel and in this poem she appeared just in time. Keep up the great work!
This was a great poem. Sometimes it's hard to say things when the time presents it's self because we are scared of other people's reaction! Keep up the good work!
Wow, I love that poem being that I am in a semi-long distance relationship. I hope I will never have to lose my boyfriend but in the event that I do I will have to set him free. Keep up the great work!
Wow, that is very interesting. In a way, I feel that when someone tells you to ignore a family member because of the feelings they have for them, that tears a family apart. You should always love your family and never turn away from them because one day you may need them.
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