It feels crazy when you have to let go and let your siblings grow on their own,, doesn't it? This is what I got from your poem, it was really good. Keep on Writing!
Wow, that's really sad. Funerals are really hard to deal with, but as long as you have someone there to console you, it makes it a little easier to deal with.
Sounds like you really could of been someone with a big name! That goes to show that you can't throw your life away because it'll turn into something you'll regret in the long run. Keep on writing!
That's crazy. Are you really confined to a bed? Is this story true or is it fiction? Are you going to elaborate? I would love to hear more. Keep on writing!
I was a little confused. Do her parents treat her like some kind of slave? Is the story going to continue you on to say why her stepfather is cruel or why her mother so naive? Otherwise, it's good! It's like a girl crying for help silently like I used to be. Please email me if you continue this story. Keep on writing!
Wow that was deep. Losing someone is hard, believe me. I lost my best friend, who was like a brother to me, in The Iraq War and I lost my grandma to liver failure. Keep your head up and keep writing.
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