Well done Tanishq - what a great way to remind people of the greed of large corporations - I feel inpired to go shop today at my local small store!
You have such a talent for personable writing, it makes the reader feel like they are being confided in by a friend - I love it!
Congrats on the win!
Excellent use of the spare me the details phrase at the end. It injected a bit of humor into an tense moment while also giving the reader a glimpse into the weariness and disappointment the mother mus of felt at that moment.
I'm interested to know how you went in the comp?
What a tragically poignant piece of writing. It is saddening to imagine you would wish to escape when you obviously have a beautiful talent to express yourself. I am keen to read more of your honest poetic style.
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