You are right, of course. Our scratches are never complete...never perfect...ever evolving. Well said and very informative. Thank you for sharing your reasoning.
I am here to review your poem, At The Cross. Your verses had nice descriptions and imagery. The message was lovely. This was a good one to read just before Easter Sunday. I enjoyed it and appreciate you sharing it. The rhyming was good as well. Thank you.
I am here to review Mother Nature Waking. Your poem has lovely imagery in the descriptions. The rhyming is very nice as well. The poem's story flows well and it is very interesting to read. I do feel that in the first couple of verses, the timing is off and could be easily remedied. All in all a very nice poem. Good work!
Hello! Welcome to Writing.Com! I am here to review Insomnia.
I picked this story because I can relate to not being able to sleep. Sometimes, my days and nights become confused after I spend a lot of time writing.
Your story is interesting and your observations are are good...For instance, talking about your trip to the supermarket at 3 a.m. and seeing the bored workers who would rather be in bed than at work.
I found the sentences to be very long at times. It would be easier to read if they were shorter. Also, varying the length of your sentences will add to the reader's level of interest. You did this in the first two sentences in the last paragraph.
I finally got around to reading this article and it was excellent. It shows me just how much I don't know and how much I need to learn. I am here to review your article.
I read this because I am trying to write my first short story.
Your article was easy to read and gave specific examples.
It was interesting from the get go and all the way to the end.
I did not find any errors.
The suggestion for The Writers Choice Newsletter is great and so is the Creative Writing Institute website. I am signing up for a class the minute I get home from next week's vacation.
You wrote a compelling poem. It had me guessing. Very interesting and poignant at the same time. It could picture your actions. The flow was very good.
Hello! I am here to read and review: A final goodbye
Format:Good
Rhythm/Flow:OK. I did not have a good sense of the rhythm until the third time I read it through.
Emotions: Sadness; understanding of what you witnessed.
Errors: none found
Suggestions/Comments: If possible, the reader should not stumble over the rhythm the first time. Reading this out loud may help in finding a way to smooth it out. Your words are quite true and very well expressed. I should know, I've been there too.
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