Wow, really good poem. I really liked the beat, too. I really liked how you made it short and too the point, and repeated good and important things. Good made up myth, that would scare me from that place. I also liked how you made it so dramatic pf her about to die and she saying, "I swear I'll haunt you, no matter what you do," I really liked that. Good poem overall!
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