I'm not really sure what to say to this. First off, I love your choice of words and your structure, and how you gradually work up to the climax of your poem. The concept you have here is genious, especially the woman and the incubus and the entire concept of vouyerism you portrayed here. Excellent work. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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