Vagueness aside at points, the story got me. Do you have anymore of it written or is this it cause this could easily be a book. Hell this could be like the second book in a series lol. Your characters have personality and of all things a history, which i enjoyed. The story is good and i like that you added more then just plain humans to the mix. Keep up the good work
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