I can feel the emotion and I love the idea. I just wish you didnt use the same words. The title is really not that appealing. Also the deatils could go in more depth.
I love this poem. Its very deep and thoughtful. I can see the imagery and everything thats happened. I can really tell you put your emotions in ti. Great Job.
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