A very nice, artistic and well written poem. You have a very great poet in you. Your chose your words very well. Your starting and ending lines very well- written. Especially your first three to four lines, they were fablous. Hope you keep writing more and mor beautiful porms like these.
A very nice, well written story. You can be a great novel writer. I'll read yor next part too if write it. Please notify me if you write through email. Hope you keep writing more.
A very well written poem. It had a very meaningful theme. You chose your words very well and I love your way of writing. No doubt it got an awardicon and 4.5 rating. I am sorry that I don't have much gps to present you an awardicon. I hope you keep writing more and more beautiful poems like these.
A very nice poem. It was short but sure sweet. I like your way of writing that is the olden English way of writing. I Liked your sense of humor too. Could writie it a little longer if you. Also you chose your words very well. You have a great poet in yourself. Have you published anything yet? Hope you keep writing more good poems.
I think you have written this one vey well. The dialogues were very well written. You started off your story very well. I hope you keep writing more good stuff like this.
A very nice little short story. Very good usage of words. I think your dialogues too were very nice. Hope you keep writing more short stories like these.
A very nice short story. Good usage of words, I liked your style of writing very much. You gave a good start for the story i.e your first paragraph was good. Brought in that small humor content very well. I hope you keep writing more and better short stories like these.
A very nice and interesting tale. Forced me to read untill its end. Is this really a true story? Quite good use of words and I think you wrote the first paragraph really well. Could do a little more detailing. So, I'll be waiting for the other two occasions as you said in the last paragraph.
I think that this was a very meaningful and a very sensible article. I think your article contains no room for for improvement. It was simply perfect with very meaningful great advises. If everyone follows it, it may change the world and make it a better place to live in.
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