I feel much emotion in this poem. It's difficult to verbally express love from the heart and so we resort to writing out our feelings to be read by our beloved. When the object of our love is in close proximity, those feelings get locked inside. We cannot speak. Our hearts pound. Our hands get clammy. How can we expect to breathlessly whisper "I love you" when we can barely breath? And so we pen the words our hearts are screaming.
I hope you keep writing. This is a beautiful expression of love.
I found "Dream Cottage" romantic and ethereal; very pleasing to read. I could easily see the castle set against the beautiful blue sky; in fact, I could visualize myself running through its fields, smelling the green, lush grass and hearing the sounds of the animals as they grazed.
This is my first experience reading a Rondeau form and I very much enjoyed it's smooth rhythm and style. It's difficult for me to find fault with any of it. The sentences flowed nicely and I thought it was beautifully written.
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