This was a wonderful piece of writing. It's fairly short, yet it still really captured my attention. I feel that it really hit on some major issues and definetly got the point across that there are more important things in life than what is being focused on today.
Your poem also reflected some of the same ideas I've written about in the past. I'm definetly looking forward to reading more of your work!
~Ocean
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