I liked your poem. At first it was complicated but a crazy person in love and can't forget her loved one means like it's a disease so nice. Wait... Mike?
It seems to me you're really good. Let me be random but first I'll get some food. I
'm not much of a poet but I know I can write it. See what I did there? Yeah I know. No more rhyming don't have the time. Liked your poem keep it up c:
It was short but it had words that could make you think and feel the words you know? I liked it maybe it could've been longer and also could've added just a bit more but I liked it.
I liked it because I can connect to it. I love the imagery you use. I don't think it needs much else. It made me sad and come to think of it that's what it needed to do, to make me feel something.
I honestly did like it but what I didn't like was how at first I didn't really seem to understand. I knew it was about blood, but then I didn't get it. Now I do. I also like the words you used and it rhymed nicely.
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